bleed brother bleed
cry sister cry
love father love
sigh mother sigh
years and then more
we go grey and get old
and time inevitably goes by
heed brother heed
try father try
family and friends
and lovers and more
the depth that you crave in your life
cede brother cede
fly people fly.
one of your best ever brother
Thanks bro.
This is powerful..yet compassionate. Had to read it over and over again.
Appreciate that Andrea, thanks for saying so. 🙂
Great work, Pete! This is like a chant, I can hear it being spoken as I read it! 🙂
Good, I like getting inside your head! It’s a weird one haha, well “different”. Thanks for reading and commenting.
No problem, great work as always! 🙂
Have you thought about recording any of your poetry? I think it would be a good idea and a new way to present your work. (I like experimenting.) 🙂