MOUNTAINS AND RIVERS

i’m at a loss for words
of the kind that impress
or titillate or move

mountains or rivers
that make you think twice
the words that i say just can’t move

mountains and rivers
don’t hear me at all
move rightly enough on their own

i’m at a loss for words
but of mostly ideas
that move mountains and rivers and hearts.
mountainsandrivers

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8 thoughts on “MOUNTAINS AND RIVERS

  1. Although the structure doesn’t suggest it, this piece has a firm rhythm that lands easy on the ear. Lovely language and style. Well done.

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