UNDERTOW

you are so funny
money honey
just can’t buy
a better treasure
than your smile
across the land
no sweeter treat
please understand
i just can’t bear
another scare
cause when you go
the undertow
pulls right on me
right out to sea.

undertow

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5 thoughts on “UNDERTOW

  1. Love it! And the final metaphor of being “out to sea” snuck up on but is so right …

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